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| nerdwithagun 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful, beautiful! The imagry in this is really great-your poem reached out to me. I am filled with admiration. |
| Allis Dalline 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful is the only word I can find to accurately describe this poem. Great rhythm, and the repetition immediately demands attention from "Maestro," one individual, and from the world as a whole. I love the line, "I comb my hair with the thickness of your words"--it makes language seem so tangible, as real as anything we can sense or feel in the physical world. -Allis D. |
| simpleplan13 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusei like the repition a lot... the last line is very nice |
| DarkBlysse 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuse...still speechless from that last poem, and this one only intensified that. Marvelous. I love your descriptions and the repitition of 'Maestro.' |
| Anaare 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseAn exquisite poem, with beautiful and quite sensual imagery. I much enjoyed reading it. Very wonderful and I commend you. Truly good work. Thank you indeed for the review. It has been a while since I have read your work and for that I am sorry. I will try to read and review more. With regards, Anaare |
| Fabian Cortez 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful Imagery throughout the piece: I will not squander love, like the child-faced woman who brought you to me. Whimsical, and wrapped in mornings haunting glow. I comb my hair with the thickness of your words, Maestro. I cover my breasts with the weight of sound. Sensual, and stunningly composed; yet there is such a thread of sadness throughout. You’ve shown here experience of a tragic life, yet also such innocence in this stanza, and if this had been the entirety of the piece it would still hold the same worth. Very Well Done KEEP WRITING! F.C |
| The Jynx of Kari 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI think the true meaning behind this is beyond my reach but I still think it's beautifully written and well spoken. There's such poetic beauty resonating through this poem that it makes my heart ache. much admiration, __Kari |
| Honor Bound 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusebeen awhile, no? love this piece, its quite deep. lovely imagery. simply love this piece, a favorite. peace |
| Lenaboo 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. P.S. I love the title. Seriously. |
| recycle rhymes 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abusepretty love the imagery. nice work. |
| The Monkey King of Pirates 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseYou always write beautifully! I am going to add it to my favs and my C2! Best Wishes! *TSP |
| re x invented 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abusebeautiful in that felliniesque kind of way. inspiring. |
| CostumeForAGutterball 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWOAH! Okay--this one blew me away-awesome! You have a definate talent for writing-I love the images in this piece - quite lovely! |
| doxology 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseabsoultley beautiful. Peace and Love ~> Lifted |
| Artemis Obscure 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abusePowerful and at the same time, utterly sad as well. Wonderful poem, with so much emotion in it. |