|Reviews for Mosaic Flesh|
| rhyddid 4/30/07 . chapter 1
this is extremely powerful and it relates to me a sense of very dtrong desperation!
| SirScott 4/18/07 . chapter 1
That was a descriptive poem. I really form the images in my head. Not sure if that's a good thing.
| Grimm Days 4/17/07 . chapter 1
Wow... just the image you get when you read this. Great work!
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 4/16/07 . chapter 1
O. I love the title.
The imagery in this piece is amazing. Great job!
| a beautiful somewhere 4/16/07 . chapter 1
I love how one line seems to almost bleed into the next...
This is amazing.
| a silenced revolution 4/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow... Just... Amazing as always. *favourite*
| DarkBlysse 4/16/07 . chapter 1
Great title, Ashelin! It made me want to read it ASAP!
I love your description of blood as 'red flow.' It's really simple but it hits home hard.
"Grey sky eyes"-I love how that sounds. So dark, hopeless, and perfectly sad.
| Her Wishing Well 4/16/07 . chapter 1
Amazing descriptive imagery. I loved it and the title as well. Freshly unique