I admire you for writing this poem in rhyme. Your command of English is excellent, for I do not detect any awkwardness in your choice of words. I have never experienced Winter in my own country, so thanks for painting such a vivid picture of it.

OMG! You amaze me!

I have to add this to my favs and my C2!

*TSP

Very nice work.
Though retrained in typical fashion, very nicely done.
Beautiful.
You have a way with words, that's for sure.

Thanks for the good read and keep it up.

Take care,

-N