Hmm.. This was OK. I'm running out of things to say, which means I left to many reviews today, ha ha.

i love this. it's sad, depressed and miserable throughout, then at the end it's uplifting. i liked how it was broken up, it made it read well, but there are others who will accuse you of being formatting happy or something along those lines. great job.
paz,
-the delirious one