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forbiddenstars
2008-06-26
ch 63, anon.
abuseokay, okay, okay.

firstly, i have to admit that i did a marathon read on this and only gave you this one review. i'm sorry.

secondly,

ZOMG. YOU ARE SO AMAZING.
i'm not even kidding, i was literally hugging my knees while i read this on the couch. this...
its amazing.

love the way your characters are well developed, but not overanalyzed or left vague.

your plotline and setting are phenomenal, completely blew me away.
you had me crying there for a minute, when aniol was "killed"
i almost died.

and the extra bit about kiev...was amazing. wonderfull...

to sum it up,

ZOMGILOVEYOUYOUARESOAMAZING

thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with the world and never, never, never stop writing.
Ish Mish Kiki
2008-06-18
ch 63,
abuseI am posting a review here, even though I know this story is long finished. I really really enjoyed reading it. Tremendously. It's amazing how you created an entirely new universe on your own, and have an original and endearing story take place in it too. Very well done!

I'll be reading Assassins Silver as well. For now I'll probably also indulge myself in the rest of your work. Like SHIS and Identity, which I very thoroughly loved reading as well.

Keep up the magnificent work, you definitely have an amazing talent!
Lal111
2008-06-05
ch 4,
abuseAniol in my language is 'angel'. It seems fitting :)
Isidris Gry
2008-06-04
ch 8,
abuseThanks for this, you know I love scenes like it! I think you did a wonderful job. I like how vulnerable Aniol is and the fact that Kaji is still wearing cloths!
moneymakestheworldgoround
2008-04-05
ch 2,
abuse*GASPS*
wat a way to start a story.




and i like it. ^^
Silent Retribution
2008-03-25
ch 12,
abuseO nice explanation yah! Wo. I gtg now but you know. I love your story!!
Silent Retribution
2008-03-25
ch 11,
abuseYeah, Kaji has now know what we have know from Chapter 3 of this story. O Does Aniol have a twin? Whose the freaky guy in the visions. I'll keep on reading.
Silent Retribution
2008-03-25
ch 9,
abuseOMG, awesome climax, really good. The story is good but the writing hasn't being your best so far. Let's go on to the next chapter, woo.
Silent Retribution
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abusei have to admit, it was very confusing in the beginning but i got it at the end. It sounds really good. Onto the next chapter!
Mystik Wryter
2008-01-24
ch 61,
abuseOh wow, this story was amazing. I'm so glad that one day I got bored and decided to look through fiction press for interesting stories. This is definitely one of my favorites.
Andre Cavillcanti
2008-01-06
ch 38, anon.
abusei have to say that i absolutely love your story. i started it today and just can't stop. have you thought about pulishing it? you should
well i have to stop reading it cuz my eyes hurt from too much computer.
:) can't wait to finish... YAY
Qryous
2008-01-06
ch 10,
abuseOh so he was gay in the first place, or maybe that term doesn't exist in your story ' well, a new character!
Qryous
2008-01-06
ch 8,
abuseYou deserve more reviews. Kaji seems like a pretty emotional guy, hm, and he started liking the little guy quite quickly, or is it cause of the bonding? Still, it seems Kaji has a little temper problem ^^;; he looswed control a lot doesn't he~ Still, i like your characters!
Qryous
2008-01-06
ch 4,
abuseI am inspired by the way you write :) And such an awesome descreption-author as you exists who writes slash :) I am very happy~~
MerieLiss
2007-11-06
ch 61,
abuseThis is ine of the best yaoi stories i have ever read ^_^
can't wait to read the sequel! XD
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