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| UrvanWhitaker 2008-01-10 ch 1,  | abusehm, don't know bout the car though, I mean I've never had one-hah!-but so true nonetheless. love this one. |
| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseHey Wilkem!! Long time... Anywhoo on with the review!! So I really like your 3 syllabal scheme! It's orginal and interesting. Keep up the good work buddy!! --ShookieInLove (Formerly, Shookie Smiles Sweetly) |
| School Principal of Mundani... 2007-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseMundanity, eh? I know that feeling . . . when you're working on your desk nonstop . . . |
| aridelaine 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was interesting and just kinda random but I really liked it. The only thing is the line "school stinks" is only two syllables and you said that all the lines had 3 but that one does not fit. Keep writing! |