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Reviews For: We're Animals

Breathing Me In
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseWoo! I really, really, really enjoyed that. And I know just how ya feel. ^.~ Thank you for the review by the way, and the favs add!

*cooes*

Peace!
Ammom
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseIt's very nicely done. Well written and thought out. Iike the second stanza the best I think.
Violet Marx
2007-05-18
ch 1,
abuseA good poem that goes against anti-stereotypes without sounding cliched and...cliched. ^^; Comparing it to animals is something I've never seen before. It adds an almost childish view to it, making it seem easier to understand, in a way.

The rhyming is a bit forced, but not much. 'While the Foxes pull their pranks.' sound a bit off beat.
perpetual questions
2007-04-16
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. Good rhythm and rhyming. I loved the ending.
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