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| Breathing Me In 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWoo! I really, really, really enjoyed that. And I know just how ya feel. ^.~ Thank you for the review by the way, and the favs add! *cooes* Peace! |
| Ammom 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's very nicely done. Well written and thought out. Iike the second stanza the best I think. |
| Violet Marx 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseA good poem that goes against anti-stereotypes without sounding cliched and...cliched. ^^; Comparing it to animals is something I've never seen before. It adds an almost childish view to it, making it seem easier to understand, in a way. The rhyming is a bit forced, but not much. 'While the Foxes pull their pranks.' sound a bit off beat. |
| perpetual questions 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. Good rhythm and rhyming. I loved the ending. |