found this today and have spent all afternoon reading it!

the glowing thing reminds me of 'stardust'

xx

Awesome chapter. I can't wait until she alters. Update soon.

Oh no! He's going to move in on Kaedan's girl! Shoo, slutty light walker, shoo! (I know, I know, they can't exactly help the sleep-around nature, but still.) Here's hoping you win! (You know, if you update a LOT, you'd probably win... hint, hint!)

Oh! Does a review competition mean you will post a lot to give us more chapters to comment on? :D Seriously though, nice chapter. It'll be interesting to see how the Fionn thing plays out.

Ooh I just want to read more! I found this chapter quite funny. You're very good at bulding atmospheres. Truly remarquable, I just cant wait for the next update now! I felt that the chapter was a little short but thats probably me as a reader loving the story so much..anyway, i have a feeling the new guy in town's gonna be trouble! Update soon pretty please:-D

I absolutely love your story. You're a talented writer and i really like your style. I hope you'll update soon...i can't wait!

*Takes a very, very, very deep breath*

UP-DATE, UP-DATE, UP-DATE!

Sorry, sorry, I know how busy people get when finals roll around but I can't help it, I LLOVE(stretches out, underlines, italicizes, bolds, and capitalizes) this story...

And I don't think I've added it to my favorite stories yet...

I will, when it's finished.

Please update soon(when you have free, free time with no studying, homework, or plans to go out with friends...Cause seriously, during finals time, time to go out with friends/boyfriend is rare as a chance to actually meet a guy as hot as Kaedan)

Love you as much as I love Edward!(yes, I have read Twilight, and I may have an Edward-o-meter...LoL)

Once again, please update when you have time!

*looks for next chapter button* arghh! No! I've been reading straight since diner :) and now there is nowhere further to go... Very nice story. Can't wait to see what happens! Keep going.

I just started this and I really like it! Your writing style is very nice and flows well. And I like Danika, she looks to make a good protagonist. If I didn't have to go to class I would keep reading, but I will definitely get back to this soon!

I just needed to say..weldone! You're really good, you know you got me hooked by the end of ch1! Just so you know i started reading last night and couldnt tear myself away till i'd read it all(4am!) You've got a real good story here and your style's only getting better. I've fallen in love with kaedan and loving how well you developed both his character and danika's so please do keep writing!

Very engaging chapter. I can't wait to read more. Your characters are very believable, even if this is fantasy. Update soon! _

Rebekah

Marvelously written chapter, again. I wonder if Jess is going to remember the other day! That could cause some serious problems. Anyway, update soon. _

Rebekah

Ehee, she glows like a bug in june! Ahh, I can't wait to see what happens next... So happy that you're writing more! Umm, I suggest you make the deal with your muse... I REALLY want to read more soon.

YEAYAYAYAYA!

New chapter!

So, so, so happy, thanks for updating!

My goodness! I positively LOVE this story! You are an amazing writer, seriously. You write with experience. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens. _

Rebekah