 friendsforever0165 2009-10-12 . chapter 7I know Asato likes Tai. But does Tai like Asato(me is confused) |
 friendsforever0165 2009-10-12 . chapter 6aw a kiss from asato |
 friendsforever0165 2009-10-12 . chapter 2this story is really intresting ^.^ |
 02 2009-02-25 . chapter 9 Wow, another interesting story from you. I'm really enjoying the world they live in - where the "Elites" rule, and the poor stay poor. It's a very good social statement.
Sorry if I'm being nitpicky, and maybe it's just me, but I'm not entirely clear on how Asato left the orphanage. Or how he met Teji and Ganei. Once again, sorry for being pushy, but I'd like to see some back story between these two.
Once again, great writing as always.
-02 |
 lalaru 2008-10-02 . chapter 6 oh wao i like this sorty alot
umm but just one thing . . . r teji an ganei together?? hahaha i wish |
 Kirie Toshi 2008-07-19 . chapter 9I had to reread the whole story to remember who everyone was and where this chapter picked up ^^;
anywho, Asato is so adorible, I love him so much C: I love how he's such a puppy. Same with Tai, he's so cute aswell! And I go "aw" every time they kiss. It's that adorible.
PLEASE UPDATE FASTER D: |
 emmatheemmu 2008-07-10 . chapter 9OMFG.
This made my day.
Poor Teji! Asato's such a delinquent. D: |
 HurtMe 2008-07-10 . chapter 9Even if nothing much is happening, I still like this chapter. I think Asato is absolutely adorable. And that damned sentence finally makes sense. Lol.
Btw, to anyone that's reading, I'm the beta, and I really am amazing. Go read the stories. It's okay, I killed the monster! Nevermind, no one's reading... |
 emmatheemmu 2007-12-15 . chapter 8LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE.
You know this is my favorite of all your stories~ :> |
 emmatheemmu 2007-09-24 . chapter 7I.
JUST.
DIED.
from bloodloss. srsly. *A* |
 Kirie Toshi 2007-09-24 . chapter 7I just started reading this story last night and I got so hooked that I ended up reading every chapter! So now I'm eager to read the next one D< SO UPDATE! please xD |
 emmatheemmu 2007-08-18 . chapter 6SURPRISE KISSU!
I love that Special-kun is two years younger than Tai and is STILL seme! (At least, I hope he is...>.>)
I'm loving Kin more and more these days...maybe I should draw him ,too~ |
 Kerushii 2007-08-18 . chapter 6Hey! (It's Aeslehk... I just changed my name.) :P Lovely new story Lynn! *nods* I believe this is as interesting as "Of Slaves and Gods". I can''t wait to read more of that story, as well as this one. Keep up the good work. Keep writing! ^^
~Kerushii
(Aeslehk) |
 emmatheemmu 2007-08-10 . chapter 5As always
I WANT MOAR.
I wanna draw Teji and Ganei now!
~A~ |
 Esquirella 2007-06-18 . chapter 5Le sigh. |