Keep going. PLEASE I need this story to end
Make it good

You are awesome

SO hilariious . Awesome

Is the heavily accented woman his mother ? Anyway wonderful story bravo

I think we could do without the side notes within the story for example the part about Kendra not getting the snack back. We should figure that out by reading the story. Apart from that really good story

This is the funniest and most cutest interracial story of all time luv it love keep up with the good work

I am so sad to see this end.

Okay, I've decided that Stella really needs a good slap for abusing Kendra,That one is truly bossy and gets too much of a kick out of Kendra's awkward situations.

Anyway. Kendra and Deondre are just perfect together. I saw on your profile that you thought this was choppy and wasn't going well, I don't see it, I think you were doing perfectly.

You made Deonte into a guy any girl would be proud to have, he is handsome, but his personality is better. So awesome.

I swear I love Kendra and Deandre, her friends are a little irritating though, well, alot.

Still loving this, you have a great sense of humor

I love this it was really funny and cute, but I must admit if I had bossy friends like these two, trying to force me on to some guy, acting like my mother, I would seriously hurt them and quickly dismiss them.

I felt embarrassed of Kendra and was pissed at the fun her friends found in her embarrassment.

They make it seem as though it was life or death for her to find a man, some friends, tell them stop acting like your pimp Kendra. lol

Romantic comedy is definitely your forte.

The words flowed seamlessly and on point.

The conversations and come backs were perfect

Yep, I'm still loving this

LMAO

you're doing great, these two play off each other perfectly.

I felt as though I was actually there.

fantastic job

All I can say is I'm loving this so far.

These two are adorably fantastic together.

LOL

This is such a good story and Kendra is a very likable heroine. Deonte is cool too but Kendra is just so precious. I wonder who was at the door? Awesome story...I absolutely LOVED it.