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Jazbkwm-unlucky-13 2009-11-08 . chapter 18
I know you haven't posted anything new but I hope you finish this story. Everytime I read it, the cliff-hanger kills me each time. Please post more, you''re an amazing writer with a large and capitivated audiance.
s1mba 2009-10-31 . chapter 18
aww, i like your story a lot!
sarcasm is my middle name 2009-08-21 . chapter 18
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idiotendenial 2009-08-07 . chapter 18
I know this story has been on hold for more than a year now, but I want to tell you that I love it so much and it inspired me to keep writing. I guess I can only hope that you contine it one day because it was truly a masterpiece that I could relate to. You're a brilliant writer ad I appreciate your contribution to this site and to my personal writing history as well. I don't know what else to say except thank you and please continue.
Daniels lover 2009-07-04 . chapter 18
Very cute story, I just found it today and read al of it in a few hours (with a few food breaks lol).
idiotndenial 2009-06-19 . chapter 17
Okay, idk if you actually read these but please please please please please please please finish. I love your story so much and so many people have quit this website in the interracial area and I hate it. Your story is so relatable...please don't just leave. please.
theirdre 2009-03-15 . chapter 18
this is a good story. please finish this story soon.
fanaserie 2009-03-02 . chapter 18
i like you're story, but you' traduction of "you owe me" is wrong, it's more like "tu m'en doit un (baiser)"( i'm french)
johnandvan 2009-02-16 . chapter 18
I knew Deonte's momma was due back, wondered where she was...and how she left her men to fend for themselves, I know I'm not going to like her...but the work so far was fabulous, Kendra falling and Deonte is such a mature young man at his age, and just exactly her match. More scenes with her girlfriends, and can momma get life though the father walked away I'm feeling a mid life crisis, and would love to know how the mother is handling the divorce out of the blue.

JV
johnandvan 2009-02-16 . chapter 4
I haven't finished reading yet but so far I'm entertained by Kendra and her friends. I have trouble picturing Deonte Rilington as caucasian with that first name unless his mother had friends who gave that to him, but as a character he is confident. Self-assured and very cool nice contrast to Kendra who I think is way to ** the young man, but entertaining it is. Back to reading.
Jaynie 2009-02-11 . chapter 18
This is one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. I couldn't get through a single chapter without laughing. I love the way you write! I know this story is currently on hiatus, but I will gladly and patiently wait for more. I don't find stories that truly make me laugh very often.

Even though it's funny, you definitely know how to write an emotional scene. I found myself laughing and crying with Kendra as the story went on. She caught my attention and held it from the first chapter. She's real and I love it. Keep it up, I most definitely will be reading.
mekaky 2008-12-31 . chapter 18
omg, i just love this story :)
please update!
JB 2008-12-12 . chapter 18
OMG I love you but can you please update? I'm dying..
tah 2008-11-24 . chapter 18
The story is very enjoyable and very funny. Deonte and Kendra are very cute together. And Kendra is corky and weird character but very loveable. Looking forward to reading more.
tonirenee 2008-10-03 . chapter 18
Where is the rest? JUst as the drama builds and the story climaxes... Anxiously waitin
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