i like the story cant wait for the next update.

I have really ejoyed your story so far, but, I have one question. In an earlier chapter kendra hums some Fergie, but in this chapter, they are listening to Britany Spears... What's up with that?

...I can't wait for chapter five, so please keep going! ]...

very good chapters so far... i love Kendra's voice, love of cheese, dramatic/spastic outbursts.. and laziness!... Deonte... what can I say about him...-_0.. he's cool.. i think.. and kinda... a ... jerk... but.. sweet the same time... so i guess he's just complicated... and a cheese murderer! how could he eat her precious cheese! XD... well...yeah... u r doing really good so far.. keep up the good work... now i'm gonna go read chapter 4 YAY! ( and i can't wait 4 chapter 5!

i like... now give me that cookie!

OMG! CHEEZE! i like! ... i like cheeze, and cheerios.. wonder if they would go well together? .. -gets back on subject- ur story is really good!

... ok.. i reviewed...

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xD Rofl. She's so spastic. Please continue soon!

that was great! more soon!

Woot! I'll review!

Dam all the cheese murders in the world! *shakes fist at them*

keep writing!

Possibly one of the best stories I've read I kept laughing for 10 minutes and I couldn't actually pinpoint what I was actually laughing at.

Good Job!

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LMAO. 4 is pretty close right? I love it! Swiper no swiping! She's hilarious, I dunno, he has the patience of a saint to deal with her...anyways, please keep going!

Lmao. Oh my goodness, she's accident prone and has ADD. Deonte's name sounds just a bit ghetto, but that's okay, I enjoyed it. Please continue soon!

Cute. I like Kendra, she's funny, and the coach was cool. Deonte's great. I love their fighting, it's not melodramatic hate-turned-love or anything, just funny.

Three corrections: In the first chapter, her 'food' hits a basketball and you're missing a period after talking about her brother and rolling her eyes. In the second, Kendra tells the coach "your ancient" but should say "You're".

Other than that, great.

Keep writing,

-Freaky

lol

crazy. insane. but fuckin hilarious.

update soon?

*beg beg* x_X

luff it :o

This is some awesome writing. When you Changed the name from Kendra to Kennie was that another nickname? Also, just a random fact that makes me like your story even more: My names Kendra! (Her names way cooler but the nicknames the same, so)