|Reviews for Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness|
| Marti 6/23/11 . chapter 2
I love the flow of this story. I can definitely relate to the main character and have been laughing since I started reading this story. Keep up the good work.
| mz stancil94 1/15/11 . chapter 18
Please continue to write this story! It is so good and I have fallen in love with it. Don't ignore a fan of your work! I will be checking in to see if you have updated it.
| Frankie 12/6/10 . chapter 18
I really enjoy your story it is so funny and I wish you would continue it :)
| Jazzisabatmanfan 11/8/09 . chapter 18
I know you haven't posted anything new but I hope you finish this story. Everytime I read it, the cliff-hanger kills me each time. Please post more, you''re an amazing writer with a large and capitivated audiance.
| Wanchoo 10/31/09 . chapter 18
aww, i like your story a lot!
| sarcasm is my middle name 8/21/09 . chapter 18
| idiotendenial 8/7/09 . chapter 18
I know this story has been on hold for more than a year now, but I want to tell you that I love it so much and it inspired me to keep writing. I guess I can only hope that you contine it one day because it was truly a masterpiece that I could relate to. You're a brilliant writer ad I appreciate your contribution to this site and to my personal writing history as well. I don't know what else to say except thank you and please continue.
| Daniels lover 7/4/09 . chapter 18
Very cute story, I just found it today and read al of it in a few hours (with a few food breaks lol).
| idiotndenial 6/19/09 . chapter 17
Okay, idk if you actually read these but please please please please please please please finish. I love your story so much and so many people have quit this website in the interracial area and I hate it. Your story is so relatable...please don't just leave. please.
| theirdre 3/15/09 . chapter 18
this is a good story. please finish this story soon.
| fanaserie 3/2/09 . chapter 18
i like you're story, but you' traduction of "you owe me" is wrong, it's more like "tu m'en doit un (baiser)"( i'm french)
| johnandvan 2/16/09 . chapter 18
I knew Deonte's momma was due back, wondered where she was...and how she left her men to fend for themselves, I know I'm not going to like her...but the work so far was fabulous, Kendra falling and Deonte is such a mature young man at his age, and just exactly her match. More scenes with her girlfriends, and can momma get life though the father walked away I'm feeling a mid life crisis, and would love to know how the mother is handling the divorce out of the blue.
| johnandvan 2/16/09 . chapter 4
I haven't finished reading yet but so far I'm entertained by Kendra and her friends. I have trouble picturing Deonte Rilington as caucasian with that first name unless his mother had friends who gave that to him, but as a character he is confident. Self-assured and very cool nice contrast to Kendra who I think is way to hard on the young man, but entertaining it is. Back to reading.
| Jaynie 2/11/09 . chapter 18
This is one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. I couldn't get through a single chapter without laughing. I love the way you write! I know this story is currently on hiatus, but I will gladly and patiently wait for more. I don't find stories that truly make me laugh very often.
Even though it's funny, you definitely know how to write an emotional scene. I found myself laughing and crying with Kendra as the story went on. She caught my attention and held it from the first chapter. She's real and I love it. Keep it up, I most definitely will be reading.
| mekaky 12/31/08 . chapter 18
omg, i just love this story :)