Poor kendra is having a bad day...why can't she tie her shoes?

WHAT! I am so sad so sad its ON HOLD! why! why why why why why why why! OH WHY!

oh CHERIO! please update soon my dah'ling, I am afraid your little baby may be feeling somewhat neglected, don't you want it to be happy? right now it has such a CLIFFHANGER! I'm afraid it feels left out, won't you make it feel better? I WANA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! PLEASE!

Please don't delete this. It may not be the best, but the story is great. Try adding more details to certain places. Revise, maybe, but please don't get rid of it.

Uh-oh, i have a bad feeling it's his mum! Please update soon! I love it!

MaXe

Oh that is cruel my friend, so cruel. Please please please update soon, this story along with your others is so cool. I love it.

JM

COMPLETE this story PLEASE!

FINALY! I've been waiting for AGES for this one whew! and here it is. It is a good chappie, I can't gush enough about your charecters they are A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.! love them well I won't gush too much you know how muchly much I love them. By the way did I mention how much I adore that Deonte speaks french to Kendra? cuz it's so awesome

I enjoying this story. It light, funny and sweet. I love Deonte and Kendra. They are great together. Their scenes together are well written. I really enjoy your writing. Hope to see more of this story Thanks

nicnac100

The way that the chapters carry on from each other is really well done. Great work

Aww Deonte is soo sweet. I want a boyfriend like him. This story is progressing fantastically!

I am wondering if Denote is french because that seems to be the first language that slips out his mouth when he starts talking. If he is then good job.

This story is terrific. You have an amazingly different writing style-but thats a good thing. this story is light and funny. I really like reading it. It must be one of the best stories i have read although as i have only read the first few chapters it had better not go down hill. Keep writing!

That was such a great update so happy to have received it been looking forward to see what was and is gonna happen next. Who is Philippe is that Deonte's mom if so talking about a big surprise huh well looking forward to your next update so please don't keep us waiting long ok?

Thanks

IP

Love this chapter. I thought it was cute and Deonte and Kendra are just too cute together. I wonder if the women is Deonte's mother? we i can't wait to find out who it is and see what happens next.