|Reviews for Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness|
| L 11/16/07 . chapter 15
GO GO GO write write write! this is AMAZING I wanna see what happens next! AH YAY finally! they are going out!
| Amanda 11/16/07 . chapter 15
I love all of the characters, there is not one that I don't like. She fainted? that is so sweet!
Awesome Chapter, update soon!
| L 11/6/07 . chapter 15
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! OKay well you certainly brought on the heat rather quickly,if it hadn't been for that repreive back during divorce land I would have thought Deonte was a stalker by now! But this is really really good! your charectar developement is AMAZING I loved the whole Kendra anger issue especially with Deonte's continued (yet somehow mature) boyishness...this makes me want to see what happens next in such a HUGE way, good way to keep the audiance hooked on the story without making it too overly dramatic and mushy, it has some real depth of human emotion and feeling in it LOVE IT the only critisism I have is watching your tenses (switching a little from past to present) BUT AMAZING... your story views which seem to take a whack at the omnipresent though somehow stay groiunded almost completely to the first person view tat is an AMAZING way to write them, it keeps it so much more real that way. anyway I love the story keep writing ! please?
| The Wind Charmer 11/6/07 . chapter 15
Yay! They're together now, right? I hope they are. It's so cool. Gods, I wish something like that could actually happen in real life, if it doesn't already. Update soon!
| L 11/5/07 . chapter 8
| L 11/5/07 . chapter 4
this has amazing depth of emotion, I LOVE the way we can tell exactly where Kendra is coming from at all times, you place us in the midst of her situations and I applaud you. The only amount of constructive critizism I have is that in my opinion Deonte seems to appear out of ABSOLUTELY NOWHERE which unless he is some sort of non human/mythical being I don't think he would be able to do quite so often, if you had him making some type of noise (twig snap, footstep, notable sensing of a presance ect) that alerted Kendra to his prescence (barring any sort of mytical interaction) it would make it that much more belivable, she doesn't have to know that its HIM right away, but unless he floats he would make some sort of noise in my opinion.
| lee 11/5/07 . chapter 2
NICE NICE LOVE IT
| CharlyB 11/5/07 . chapter 15
This was such a cute chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next step in their relationship! Thanks for the update.
| Leanna 11/4/07 . chapter 15
The chapter is out.
I am so proud of your work kenny.
Now work on the "oh la la" scenes.
| phelps112 11/4/07 . chapter 15
aww its cute. I'm glad she's with Deonte. I hope you keep them together.
| Till Tonight Do Us Part 11/4/07 . chapter 15
see i pressed the button
| The Wind Charmer 11/2/07 . chapter 14
Yay! I am so happy they finally kiss and have the little, 'I'm not good enough for you', 'yes you are' speech! It's so cute! Update soon! I really want to see if someone comes in to steal Kendra away or not! Teehee!
| Peachie Miss 10/31/07 . chapter 14
Oh lord, reading your stories always puts me in a good mood. Maybe now that they've gotten their admission of feelings out the way, there can be some competition...maybe? lol to me, Kendra is just hyper and fun, while Deonte is just laid back and taking it all in. I think they compliment each other. But that's just me. Can't wait for the next chap!
| Amanda 10/19/07 . chapter 14
Awesome update. He's falling in love with her, that is so sweet.
Thanks for the update, and update soon.
| kelsey 10/15/07 . chapter 14
i think kendra is random & spastic, & also completely hilairious! then on the other hand deonte is charming, handsome & pretty much down-to-earth, their like polar opposites & i think they make 1 of he cutest couples i've seen n a long time (real ppl & fictional characters alike!)
this was a an sweet chapter, & u got it out really fast. well done! & YES there were only like 2 mistakes that i saw n chapter 13, & i only saw 1 spelling mistake (u put of nstead of off) & 1 grammar mistake (u 4got a period on a sentence) so, kudos 2 a great job! hurray for the cheerio!