w00 h00! great chapter! i think i saw like 2 grammar mistakes, but besides that it was absolutely perfect! Yes, Deonte is a sweet wittle cutie-pie! lol... and, leanna, of course i'm strange: i love cheese, and yet i think the cheese murderer is awesome XD! well i can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work!

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Great chapter. I can't wait to read about the rest of their date. Update soon!

dude, my name is kenny too! except my real name is actually bianca. O_o blame my friends.

Fun chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one!

i just loved it...more... i want 2 read more

cute chapter...cant wait to read more!

aww. devonte's cute. and kenrda's awesome, especially for being so hyper. I like it.

Oh my gosh, you finally updated! I'm so happy! Good chapter, as always. Hehe, nothing to really add besides that.

-sniffs- I want my own Deonte!-breaks out in full tears- It's soo not fair!-runs to the bathroom to get tissue and ignores weird looks family is giving her- It's a good story though.

Cute, esp Deonte. Date time!

UPDATE SOON!

hahaha! kendra is soo funny! i love it and please update!

Great chapter as always, Can't wait for them together.

Update soon!

great work kendra is too funny and i wish she wouldn't fight deonte so much. but if she didn't it wouldn't b kendra just a clone lol

Woo hoo! Great chapter! ..Heh, as soon as Deonte said "Chaque moment sans toi, déchire un trou profond à mon coeur. Veuillez ne pas aller." I did my best mental translation and thought 'aw, how romantic' and apparenlty I translated correctly b/c everyone the table said the same thing! LOL

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Love it! She's hilarious...and they need to get together...like now...haha

Love,

Beth