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| -DreamNoLonger 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseDO NOT LET THE CHARACTERS TAKE YOU OVER. ...Seriously, that's scary. *Very* amusing read, btw. Rebecca is...ahh, you know characters, eventually they start to want more than just fame. Ed has been trying to take over my keyboard for days. .. NotathatI'mcrazyorhearvoicesinmyheadoranything,no,notthatatall... ..I'm adding this to my favorites... |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseHah hah! Definitely funny, though I'm glad this has never happened to me. Sure, I like all my characters, but not that much. And I loved the character's true reaction to the everything Will (er... you) said. Nice idea. Message from the Sercus~ |
| Georgianna 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant! And quite entertaining. I kind of fell in love with one of my characters once. As a result, I have a lot of trouble completing that piece of work. You are a fantastic writer and I hope to one day find your novels being sold in my local bookstore. |
| Ivory Taint 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseHahaha. :D When I read the first couple paragraphs I was like "Grr...I hate this. Why did I make him write this?" –smacks forehead- :p Then, I started laughing and LOVED IT. The girl's dramatic reaction to the dude's question was hilarious; she couldn't just calmly say "no." She had to scream at him and storm out. :D Then everything from there was priceless. I loved how headstrong the character was. "Hated those plates." And I loved how she never denies never loving her husband; she just kind of circumvents around that. And, stabbed by a SCREWDRIVER?! That's a pretty sad way to die, Mr. Sachiksy. (This part was overall probably my favorite part of the story.) :D I love the way it ended too. The only critique I can muster is that by reading this, you can tell that romance isn't your genre. You probably could have been more elaborate and extended it a bit, but I understand that by doing that you would be torturing yourself. My sci-fi story (whenever I get around to actually writing it) is going be like barely a thousand words. :p By the way, this story is NOT horror. No matter how much you wish it were. Sorry. It isn't much of a romance either, but definitely NOT horror. :p |
| Zaziel 2007-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse:O This was crazy -- seriously. It's not bad, but the character dialog was slightly confusing, but I liked the way the narrator interacted with his own character. :3 |