Hello!
Oh this story is charming ;) Please if you do find the time~ please please please work on this story too! I'm now really really curious about these characters; namely Braxton and Anastasia of course!... (Haha I realised I've always liked the name Anastasia) :)

PLEASE! You can't leave us hanging like this- t'is very cruel!(because I have this terrible habit... if I don't read/watch the end of a story/movie- that I start messing around in my head possible endings, and plot senarios) But, you see I would really not like to do that- because I have no idea what's going on just yet(and I believe that you will come up with something xinfinty, better).

And, most probably this story is going to be niggling about in the back of my mind screaming, 'what happened? ? ? ? , what happend? ? ? ?' I know this was written some time ago- but for my sanity :) and also for those unfortunate people around me, who see me on a daily basis- so if you could please consider.. maybe thinking about this story, after you've finished with the projects that you are currently working on? *insert numerous individuals on their hands and knees begging* XD
... okey dokey... I think I've babbled enough ^^" I'm terribly sorry if I sound really annoying! (I don't mean to be)
x reeka

I was wondering when you're going to update?

can't wait for more!! =)

aw
i love fantasy.way bettah than reality lol!!
gud chapter tho,how long is this story gonna be?

x.x

A better summary for your story would appeal to more readers and give us an understanding what will occur. Will it be a budding romance story? Or will there be action? The Fae idea interested me, along with the written descriptive imagery.

a NEW story? and its already so interesting! yay, another story for me to get addicted to, lol i trust youll be explaining all the different species or whatever later on, right? coz i have no idea what you mean by fae, like, short for faerie maybe? i have no idea :S
good work! keep it up

Interesting start for a new story! I'm really excited to read more! A word of caution, though; I understand Anastasia's distress over very intimidating and undesired changes in her life, but the flippant remarks and some of the obvious lack of tact makes her seem immature/ caracaturely childish (especially the last line). Braxton's extreme sterness and similar borderline caracature characteristics make this have a feel reminiscent of certain Harlequin Romance novels, which is not what you are aiming for, I think. I know the character's will mature and grow with each other, just be careful in how you write things in the beginning/ show their development. Overall, I like the idea a lot, and I'm really interested in exploring more of this fantasy world you are presenting here!

Excellent ^-^ this is a very promising start- I can't wait to see how those two are going to get along. Please continue soon! ^-^

love the new story.. I really hope annie and bryon work out thir misunderstandings. hope you update soon.
cheers

O! New story. Excellent job on the description. Marvelous.

I can't wait to read more!

Aww... thats so sad. I think that Braxton seems sweet yet reserved. They will make a cute couple. You know what they say... "Opposites attract,"! WE! Yay! Another great story! Updating is fun. It gets the writer lots of pretty reviews. Makes readers happy. I love updates... *hint hint* *wink wink* ;-)

sunflowersing

great first chapter. just gave the right amount of information to keep me interested. i cant wait for more so update soon!

oh! great start of a story, cant wait for more!