Love those last two lines: "He isn't coming anymore/he's already here." Very shivers-down-your-spine creepy. LoL. This was really wonderful (not that I'm at all surprised).
P.S: I forgot to mention this in my email -- I added you to author alerts. :P
O I do wonder if there is someone out there whose job is to guide the dead to their afterlife. What would happen if death rebelled and no one ever died? Well, okay, dumb question, but it's interesting to think about...hey, I might have just given myself a new story idea :)
~**Heart of the RubyFire**
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