 Titania II 2009-06-20 . chapter 15I'm so glad you updated! Good chapter. As always, loved your writing style. Keep updating! |
 K. Breckinridge 2008-11-10 . chapter 13i ABSOLUTELY LOVE this chapter! it is SO cute! |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-11-03 . chapter 12Aww, that's sweet and cute. I love it. Your story is very good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Good work.
Velvety. |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-11-03 . chapter 9Kate's extreme hunger made me laugh. I could just imagine her turning and devouring a sandwich with like animal quickness. Oh, it was so funny. Good chapter. Seth isn't so bad. He's a little suffocating though. But I suppose that's just his nature, eh?
Good job. Velvet. |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-11-03 . chapter 6Seth is an egotistical, manipulating, over reactive jerk! And Michael is just as bad! Chiming in at all the right places and listening and stuff. Kate should just go lesbian.
Kidding! XD I don't know. This story is good. I like it. It gets me all frustrated though that everything is going all WRONG! Sigh. Good chapter.
Velvety. |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-11-03 . chapter 4He can get whatever he wants except Kate, hmm? Well, at least he's trying, eh? Good job. |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-11-03 . chapter 3Aw! That's so sad. Poor Seth. What will Kate do, I wonder. On to the next chapter to find out! :)
VelvetyCheerio. |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-11-03 . chapter 2Uh oh. Guy makes girl laugh after she's on the rebound, not good. Well, I guess Seth is going bye-bye. Although, I suppose Kate should give him a second chance. If she really cares about him anyway. You know how high school love is.
Good job on this story. I like it. VelvetyCheerio. |
 Titania II 2008-02-27 . chapter 14I love this chapter! Please keep going with this story and don't make us readers wait that long for the next chapter! Oh, by the way, if you need a beta, I'll do it. Just message me the chapter. You want me to proofread and I'll do it. |
 Titania II 2007-11-06 . chapter 13Yay! Finally, another chapter! And I love it! I want them to stay together so badly, but I know it won't happen. Keep up the good work!
P.S. Maybe a quicker update next time? Please? |
 Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-22 . chapter 11AW! It's his step-sister isn't it? HAHA, aww! Nice chapter.
oh wait, there are no more!! UPDATE NOW!! PLEASE! I'LL GIVE YOU A VIRTUAL COOKIE!!
Anyway, you're in marching band?! that is SO COOL! I'm technically not in marching band, I'm captain of the Dance team that dances WITH the marching band, but I LOVE MARCHING BAND!! I'm so excited for the upcoming season! |
 Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-22 . chapter 10Aww! I loved this chapter also! |
 Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-22 . chapter 9aww! Yeah rainy days suck so badly! but oh well. great chapter! |
 Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-22 . chapter 8AWw! Poor Seth!! Oh well, he'll get Kate in the end (hopefully)
i loved the chapter, great job! |
 Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-22 . chapter 7AWW! I loved it, especially the kiss, even though it was sad it was over barely after it began.
but it was wonderful! great chapter |