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| reader 2008-08-31 ch 16, anon. | abuseI almost cried! I would have if I let myself. a couple chapters ago: "would hardly consider him an unsuitable match" --> "would hardly consider him a suitable match" Sorry, I just copied that phrase when I saw it didn't make sense, and I forgot what chapter it was after I kept on clicking "next" |
| Kjersti 2008-08-30 ch 17, anon. | abuseA bittersweet epilogue. I really liked it. I'm looking forward to your next story! :) |
| RomeLi 2008-08-29 ch 17,  | abuseI'm so glad this is finished and I'm super excited about your next story! However, I wish there was a little more personal interaction in the epilogue. Thanks for being so faithful about completing your stories! |
| Aragorn is mine 2008-08-29 ch 17, | abuseOMG man I cant wait until your next story... it sounds so promising. I am absolutely in LOVE with all your stories- though Petals is a favourite and I hope you continue writing stories at this level or higher for a long time. Circumstance has finished and such a wonderful story it was. I sound like a weirdo anyways insanely good job on this story =D |
| cordqueen 2008-08-29 ch 17, | abuseI really enjoyed Circumstance. You did a good job portraying the characters and their emotions. I'm looking forward to reading your next story. |
| mia5081 2008-08-24 ch 16, | abuseYay!! lol Update soon! ~Mia |
| Aragorn is mine 2008-08-23 ch 16, | abuseaww it's cute but I still think Daniel needs to do a LOT more grovelling =D I LOVE your stories |
| Kjersti 2008-08-23 ch 16, anon. | abuseAw! Absolutely great chapter. Perfect. Can't write much more, I have a cuddly cat wanting to sit on my laptop. ;) There will be an epilogue, right? I love this story! :) |
| RomeLi 2008-08-23 ch 16, | abuseHis hand dropped away from his eyes, and he looked up at her. “You’re standing,” he said, blinking. “You’re standing and I’m sitting and –” He stood. “Forgive me, I –” “Oh, Daniel, for goodness sake, there is no one around to care.” “I care.” When she huffed impatiently, he added, “You are my future wife, and I ought to treat you with the respect and courtesy you deserve.” That is my favorite part and some of the best lines of fiction I have ever read! Bravo! I also like how he knew he NEEDED to grovel! Thanks for a great update. |
| aims80 2008-08-23 ch 16, | abuseI really like what you have written so far and am looking forward to reading more. |
| Silveralsa 2008-08-22 ch 16, | abuseYay for happy endings! |
| rollwithit 2008-08-17 ch 15, | abuseman a sad end to andrew! i thought he was a pig before, but too bad he died with so much guilt. well, it opens the door for daniel... |
| mia5081 2008-08-17 ch 15, | abuseWhoa. As much as I disliked Andrew, I didn't want him to die. But now that I think about it, there isn't all that much that could have happened so Daniel could be with Caroline. Loved it though :D Update soon! ~Mia |
| Kjersti 2008-08-16 ch 15, anon. | abuseOh man... Good chapter. It was so sad. But I guess I got what I asked for, didn't I? Poor Andrew. And Daniel and Caroline. I can't wait to read more. |
| emerald 2008-08-15 ch 15, anon. | abuseOh God. Did he have to die? *sigh* Good writing here.Please continue! |