the rhyming gave it a sarcastic feel and i loved it. i like the way you start out with silly doodling and then go dark with watching its destruction. deep stuff. i like this, great description, keep writing! (:

Wow! Such a frickin awesome job! I loved the first verse "burned them up to see the smoke". Such an amazing line! I could really feel your emotion in this! Awesome poem!

very nice

The last stanza was disgusting in a beautiful way. When I read the last line sounds of bone breaking rang in my ears. This was wonderful, just the imagery and feeling. Great job.