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| kelsi bones 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. It seems like you and I have a similar wirting style sometimes, don't you think? This is very good; amazing similies a mirror shatters./((Just like her heart)) I'm adding this to my favorites. k.X |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow... I love it. And you got three reviews on this one!! See?! Your style is amazing just the way it is ^.^ I like the formatting with the bold and stuff... especially how it seems to echo those three little words in her head... great imagery. Only one typo I noticed (sorry, I know I'm a stickler xD) "one phase haunts" ...did you mean one phrase? I dunno. Anyway! ^.^ Great job! Oh and you never did tell me about the picture!! |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you formated and puncuated this. Nice job. Thanks for the review! Rowan. |
| RedAndBlackInk 2007-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it. keep up the good work. lizzie |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! Loved your style. The summary just pulled me in, it reminded me of something I've been thinking about lately, and I just loved how you wrote this. It sounds a lot like me...too much like me. Frickin amazing...and you're right, she won't hear you even when you call her crazy... |