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Reviews For: Masquerading Truth

kelsi bones
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseWow. It seems like you and I have a similar wirting style sometimes, don't you think?
This is very good; amazing similies
a mirror shatters./((Just like her heart))
I'm adding this to my favorites.

k.X
je suis une pomme du terre.
2007-04-23
ch 1,
abuseWow... I love it. And you got three reviews on this one!! See?! Your style is amazing just the way it is ^.^ I like the formatting with the bold and stuff... especially how it seems to echo those three little words in her head... great imagery. Only one typo I noticed (sorry, I know I'm a stickler xD) "one phase haunts" ...did you mean one phrase? I dunno. Anyway! ^.^ Great job! Oh and you never did tell me about the picture!!
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-04-19
ch 1,
abuseI liked how you formated and puncuated this. Nice job.

Thanks for the review!

Rowan.
RedAndBlackInk
2007-04-17
ch 1, anon.
abusei liked it. keep up the good work.
lizzie
PocoSnow15
2007-04-16
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! Loved your style. The summary just pulled me in, it reminded me of something I've been thinking about lately, and I just loved how you wrote this. It sounds a lot like me...too much like me. Frickin amazing...and you're right, she won't hear you even when you call her crazy...
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