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Lush
sharpedgedpen
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
He told me the same thing
Why do we always beleive the liers?
Your work is beautiful.
Lilyoftheflames
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
Wow, such emotions put into so few words. Wonderful job.
Ashelin
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
I loved this, and I totally know the feeling you describe. Wonderful. I also loved how you said "believe" instead of "believed". Made it into a whole different sort of feeling. Loved it, great job.
in a jar pk
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
such raw feeling, a feeling i recognize. this is beautiful. x
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