I love the whole thing, very beautiful order of strung words.

nicely done.

although, the last two lines.. seem a little... out of line - to me anyway.

But I do fancy "Careful with your heart

around me, dear.

I deliver cruelty,

but dress it up pretty

in honesty's clothes."

That's definately my favourite verse.

Very well done.

Keep it up and take care,

-N