Reviews for The Rift: Balance

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the feared 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuse/O O\ \ - / amazin fic dude rlly gr8 story but when r u gonna update
Carmel March 2007-09-23 ch 19,	abuseOkay, so I've been the worst reviewer in the history of reviewers. I'm so sorry for taking so long! This story is still as good as ever. Even if I haven't read it in awhile, the minute I read a few paragraphs, it all comes back to me; the characters, the plot, the style of writing, everything. It takes an amazing story, and not to mention, author, to do that :) Keep this up, and update soon! ~Carm~
Enaid 2007-09-18 ch 19,	abuseshakes head at hurst i feel like we will see him again. the horrible angry vengefull hurst. im glad jon didnt kill him. i wonder whats out in the world for them to accomplish now. update soon!
soulful butterfly 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is pretty good. Midly confusing, but good. I'll read the rest when i get time. school is killing me. so, i have to ask, are the guy, Jon, and the girl, hooking up because that is so what it sounds like.
R.E.D. the animator 2007-09-18 ch 19,	abuseGreat chapter! The training is finaly over! Do update soon, so that I can come up with a less lame review.
Carmel March 2007-08-21 ch 18,	abuseHey, we all get writer's block. Sometimes it stays for awhile, and sometimes it goes away the next day. Don't worry about it :) But just so you know, while reading this, I wouldn't have guessed you had writer's block. So, keep up the amazing work, and update soon! ~Carm~
R.E.D. the animator 2007-08-21 ch 18,	abuseYou updated! Excelent! I'm excited to see what happenes after Jon finishes his training.
Enaid 2007-08-03 ch 17,	abusejon finally found some backbone. good for him. you are right, although this chapter was short it was a very good one and involved major character development (or so i feel) and i am very excited about the finally challenge. update soon! =)
Carmel March 2007-07-30 ch 17,	abuse"No more games..." --I loved that :) As always, great chapter! I'm always anxious to read more of this story, so update as soon as you can! ~carm~
R.E.D. the animator 2007-07-29 ch 17,	abuseI suspected that it was a challenge. I can't think of anything else to say right now except that you need to hurry up with the next chapter. L8er.
Carmel March 2007-07-25 ch 16,	abuseLovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. And the characters, mostly Jon, seem to be developing even more. His feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making him a more realistic, believable character. Nicely done :) Update as soon as you can! ~carm~
Enaid 2007-07-25 ch 16,	abuseTHOSE IDIOTS! do they not understand that Hurst is the weak link. Jon's gonna feel so bad, but he needs to step up and take the leadership role. I was very glad to see a new chapter up!! i hope u keep updating and maybe a bit more frequently =) please
R.E.D. the animator 2007-07-25 ch 16,	abuseYES! I thought that you were never going to post. I am very shocked by the turn of events. I mean Horst attacking Jon is understandable. But Cedric... Update soon!
R.E.D. the animator 2007-06-19 ch 15,	abuseI love the creativeness of each task you've made. In my opinon you should summerize the next few tasks. You know, just devote a paragraph or two to each task. Also it's important to keep a reucurring theme thruoght the chapter so that you can string the tasks together better. But that's my opinon. It probably doesn't make any sense, but at least it gives you a different prespective. Keep writing ~R.E.D.
Enaid 2007-06-17 ch 15,	abuseim voting hurst as the one who has failed. i like these challenges a lot, and cant wait for more. its weird that this is only training and jon still has so much more to fight in the future. also his family is still thinking he has gone missing. i had forgotten about them. i wonder if he ever thinks about them? update soon por favor

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