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saturday displacements
Faith Adeline
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
excellent job, I really like the word choice you used. It's simple yet tells a great deal.
Faith
stalkerlesson101
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
fantastic. it really captures the feeling of weakness that comes when you rely to strongly on one person. the ache of dependency... good job
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