Hey this is a pretty cool story, your writing is very developed. I'll come back to read more later! ^_^

So what happens next?

WHOA! That was such an intense ending...ah! I can't wait for the next one!

oh, suspense builds with Ada! =O
I really like this chapter- it's so bittersweet, esp. since Isabelle's thinking about the baby so much and she's probably not even going to have it...

is charlie gone? on the hunt or just MIA?

All hail Keane!

thank you so much for giving my baby that glorious name!

charlie! is it too much to ask to LOVE YOUR LOVER!!?!?!

i like the relatedness in characters! ^_^ jk

FLATHEAD!

what a terrible day. how old is isabelle at this point?

*sob* poor isabelle! stupid man **

i like that:"The disease of pregnancy"
carrots are delish!
poor isabelle!

ah! oh no!

NO! She MUST have the baby!

numair is acting v. immature here. maybe a bit too childish for the tone in the rest of the story...

aw