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| Arana Delavi 2007-10-20 ch 49,  | abuseThis was such an amazing story! I hope the sequel comes soon! You should definitely have Zack and Cheyenne get together. :) |
| Arana Delavi 2007-10-18 ch 47, | abuseOh my gosh, my eyes are seriously getting moist! I don't want Dante to die! You're really good at building up tension! I can't believe I'm almost done reading this. It's an amazing adventure. =] |
| Kyrina 2007-10-03 ch 9, | abusewow this is a pretty good story! i love it!! anyways... |
| elcaminojoe 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abusejust stumbled upon this. pretty good chapter if long random side-tracked monologues are your thing...but I think i will pass though. tis awesome that they drive an El Camino! |
| Friend... 2007-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo your story is making me laugh.. Do you really believe that the only people that went to Vietnam were the poor poverty stricken families of the US? Because if you do you are seriously mistaken. And most "hippies" didnt go to college.. they sat around and smoked a bunch of weed.. nice try though.. And you really need to look up the history on the Vietnam "conflict".. and Rap is NOT the new rock and roll of this generation.. soo yeah... no... |
| smidojus 2007-09-19 ch 46, anon. | abuseI really hate to say it but.. Your story is going downhill. I mean, the chapters are getting WAY short, and there's no good plot to it anymore. It's pointless babble about Ari, Dante and Adam now.. |
| red-cowboy-boots 2007-09-19 ch 16, | abuseI really like this! I still have a few chapters to work my way through, but I will write a longer review when I have caught up. Keep writing :) rcb x |
| Smidojus 2007-08-27 ch 38, | abuseWicked story ;D HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
| FireFallon 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseYou said for people to correct(ish) if they found mistakes...and when you said Mia was from Austen, I'm assuming you meant from Austin, Texas not Austen...but it was good I'm looking forward to the other chapters. |
| FRUITLOOPlover. 2007-08-09 ch 29, | abusewow!! this story is awsome, chapter 29 made me cry..because im a crybaby. but this story is amazing. you're a great writer. sorry I haven't reviewed, but I got so into it..and you know. anywayy...awsome job! update soon! I wanna know what happens. |
| random writers block 2007-07-30 ch 26, | abuselove how the story is coming. update more often! i'm surprosed you havent gotten more reviews on this, its so rare to see one son long with so little reviews! keep on ...writing? :3 |
| Genesis F.T 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWow really good story. I know what it's like top be moved around alot and it really sucks. So i understand how she feels Keep writing -Genesis F.T |
| xxtotallyguccixx 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I can't wait to see how this unfolds. I'm from the South soo this should be interesting. Good start! =) |