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| rubberduckylove 2007-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseomg i freaking LOVE this. it's freaking AWESOME. you crazy lil mofo. i love the part that goes: "All she needs is a guitar in her hands and a tube of red lipstick in the back pocket of her jeans." it's pretty sweet. this kinda reminds me of instant star. idk why. idk, my bff jill? teehee, but yea, ** awesome you lil **. love. |
| sin olvido 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuse"her eyes are a map of the world, she smiles like a symphony. Yet another song written about her can’t she be nothing?" I love those lines, and though I'm usually not a fan of simple, real, happy poetry, I liked this. It's simple, but you really get a feel for the poem, you know? Like I could relate to the speaker and all. Off to read more of your work! ~Cristina |
| Ashelin 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. It sounds really good if you listen to music with it too. Haha, yeah, that was weird. I loved the lines "she smiles like a symphony./Yet another song written about her/can't she be nothing?" I love it. Great job. |