The 'Black ink drops and burns...' is interesting. For me, the intention of this poem is to show what real religion is. The first line represents blind faith for me. The second line (...on the nonbelievers in...) is about the nonbelievers who pretends they are believers. The end of this poem, (...hopeless desire), for me is forever lost in their blind faith.

Quite a long review ^^ Thanks again for the reviews in 'Disguise' and 'Bleached Soul' and adding me to your faves. This is going to my faves.


-C.N

interesting.. i like it a lot

This is amazing, it's short and to the point, yet somehow very deep.

~**~Indiana~**~

the book of life... discarding their names with the ink itself...

nice...