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| rainingontheinside 2008-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseok... so i know that this is a one shot, but it would be great if you turned it into something more. you know... maybe find out if lee really does sure her... maybe call it The Cure To The Good Girl Syndrome or something... but seriously. this thing needs a sequel... please =] |
| -RomanticallyCliche- 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. i wished u made it longer though, as in chapters! update new stories! |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abusethat is a good one shot..i loved it..its would be nice if it did turns into a story..but otherwise it pretty good..looking forward to more of your writing...bye..bye... |
| JJ March 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, fab story! I completely loved it. If it were to continue on...! I guess that's the beauty of short stories, they leave you wanting more, but tying up the loose ends. Anyway, great job! JJ March |
| angelx18 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseM.. sexilicious! xD |
| winterwonderland 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abusehot and sweet at the same time. this is so great smutty yet not too explicit.. great work! |
| Stahlut 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abusethat was so good, and if you ever decided to turn that into a long story I would love it just as much. It was absolutley awesome. |
| x3life 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abusethis one-shot was cute =) and really original!! |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseheyy i loved this hahah it was cute =] i normally dont love the good girl bad boy cliche, but this time i gotta make an exception :P thanks for a great read! |
| outsidersgirl 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abusea good one |
| jammi 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseI loved that. It was cute, sweet and hot all at the same time. I like how it left room to become a novel but at the same time we could end it anyway we wanted too depending on how the relationship continued. |
| naadz 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abusei like it...its a good story |
| FM Radio 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseYOU MUST SEQUAL! Or you could make it into a really short story. But whatever, I want MORE! PLEASE!! PLEASE!! |
| ennovy 2007-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww.. just a one-shot? |
| atreyu love 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseheh. sweet oneshot :] liked it :D |