I'm liking Lance more than Philip now. Jen is like the archetype of annoying little sisters. :D I love that she said Lance could come in, but not Delly. And then he actually left her out there! ^^ But he came back for her, which I was kind of dissappointed about actually, because it would have been pretty great if she had just stood there and then walked inside like, "What the hell?" and he said, "Well, I was seeing how long it would take you." :D

Well actually the whole thing's cliche, but still very enjoyable. :D Cliche is fun!

This is the summary that I like least, because I think that questions in the summary show a lack of creativity. But the story itself, so far, I like the most. I can't decide whether or not I'm cheering for Lance or for Phillip, as the narrator seems to be interested in both.

I love this. You're writing is incredibly addicting, it keeps me interested throughout the entire read. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~

hahaha, drunken delilah really reminds me of my friend when she's had too much to drink...
it seems like it's slowly moving along, but I'm enjoying it. I look forward to finding out who the shadow was.

Its kinda cool.I'm intrigued. Who the hell was outside the effing window? hehe

totaly good! cant wait to see what happens next. update soon

Do please continue...

ah, who doesn't love jealousy between two guys? i love the drama. keep it up!

with one chapter, you've got me intrigued...
I like it and can't wait for more.
Keep it up.