So beautiful. :)

I thought it was a little rough... It would give you the sense that it was going to Rhyme, bur then it wouldn't so it was a little weird... Other than that I got the main point.

Azena

Sweet, really well written, words obviously chosen carefully, great work, keep writing, so i'll keep reading!

Lurid

So true.

This is very deep, and true to most. Beautifully done!

I am going to add it to my C2!

Best Wishes!

*TSP