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| Azena Kira 2008-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseI thought it was a little rough... It would give you the sense that it was going to Rhyme, bur then it wouldn't so it was a little weird... Other than that I got the main point. ~Azena |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, really well written, words obviously chosen carefully, great work, keep writing, so i'll keep reading! ~Lurid~ |
| Persecuted Angel 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseSo true. |
| The Monkey King of Pirates 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is very deep, and true to most. Beautifully done! I am going to add it to my C2! Best Wishes! *TSP |