Woah... This is an amazing poem. Your imagery is amazing, I love the almost collage-like feel of the juxtaposed pieces. Good job!
-J

This is quite different from your other work - it's more surreal and the voice is cynical, bitter. This makes the poem frightening, as the imagery is so random and the voice so twisted. I love it. I feel like there's a story behind this, and I'd love to see how your thoughts followed each other as you wrote it, but I think this poem may be one that only the author can understand. Good job.