Reviews for The Path Less Traveled

Azena Kira 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseI overall really liked the poem. It was great. However, I found it odd that just a few lines rhymed, then it went back to free verse. So yeah, I thought that was weird... A line I had a little problem with is where you put "UNIQUE!" I thought it was a little distracting... Other than those, yeah I really liked the poem overall. ~Azena
Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1,	abuseSweet, really well written: 'The ground there is uneven, filled with ruts to make you fall, take away your hope' Sweet lines, really well thought up, keep writing! ~Lurid~
Gingitsune-chan 2007-10-23 ch 1,	abuseEr... I like your overall voice. The tone of it is insightful... Did you get inspiration from Robert Frost? Perhaps mocking what he once said about a "Road less Traveled?"
scotti 2007-04-20 ch 1,	abuseAh, but when you turn around take a long look at how far you've traveled...the trials that you've over come...look at how much stronger you've become because you were brave enough to take the path less traveled...the narrow path. Beautiful piece, Chaos. I did get a little chuckle at the last line...nice touch/play on words. Scottie
ohthevoices 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abuseHa, I liked the pun in the last line. =)
Kaligirl05 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abuseloneliness and broken SOLES lol.. I like this..it's hard to be unique, isnt it? Kali
The Monkey King of Pirates 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully said, as always! I am going to add it to my favs and to my C2! Best Wishes! *TSP