I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends.

Great poem, I really loved it.

yay! thank you for inviting me! and i've just arrived thank you. : )

Pretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced.

It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job.

Kali

If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people.

Very pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth...

A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep!

You always do a beautiful job!

*TSP

that's really good

short and sweet

Keep going! :]