| Reviews for My World |
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abe11a 8/1/12 . chapter 1I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends. |
Azena Kira 4/11/08 . chapter 1Great poem, I really loved it. |
peteygirl 5/23/07 . chapter 1yay! thank you for inviting me! and i've just arrived thank you. : ) |
Nemonus 4/25/07 . chapter 1Pretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced. |
Kaligirl05 4/18/07 . chapter 1It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job. Kali |
flies.like.decay 4/18/07 . chapter 1If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people. |
The Monkey King of Pirates 4/18/07 . chapter 1Very pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth... A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep! You always do a beautiful job! *TSP |
Kayla Pich 4/18/07 . chapter 1that's really good short and sweet Keep going! :] |