|Reviews for My World|
| abe11a 8/1/12 . chapter 1
I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends.
| Azena Kira 4/11/08 . chapter 1
Great poem, I really loved it.
| peteygirl 5/23/07 . chapter 1
yay! thank you for inviting me! and i've just arrived thank you. : )
| Nemonus 4/25/07 . chapter 1
Pretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced.
| Kaligirl05 4/18/07 . chapter 1
It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job.
| flies.like.decay 4/18/07 . chapter 1
If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people.
| The Monkey King of Pirates 4/18/07 . chapter 1
Very pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth...
A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep!
You always do a beautiful job!
| Kayla Pich 4/18/07 . chapter 1
that's really good
short and sweet
Keep going! :]