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| Azena Kira 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem, I really loved it. |
| peteygirl 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseyay! thank you for inviting me! and i've just arrived thank you. : ) |
| Nemonus 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abusePretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced. |
| Kaligirl05 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job. Kali |
| LadderInMyTights 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseIf that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people. |
| The Monkey King of Pirates 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth... A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep! You always do a beautiful job! *TSP |
| Clover Peters 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abusethat's really good short and sweet Keep going! :] |