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| Sorrow's Laughter 2008-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseI love this- it's going on my favorites. It's beautiful and I really like the first line. |
| relapse into change 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abusegod, i really liked this you should try more of this because it's beautiful i don't really know what else to say.. |
| el angelito 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, my mind got twisted like i don't know what...I really liked it and you should go and try to do an other. Keep writting |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseyeah- as you stated in your notes- this is more prose-like- but some people can really pull off this hybrid of poetry/prose thing very well. and you should be counted in those legions. this is so damn heartwrenching- a few spelling, grammatical errors but that's not too important. |