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| Molly Renaud 2007-12-27 ch 1,  | abuseGah, i felt like that for so long. i think everyone has those times. but you really capture them well in writing. Molly |
| vindictive.rumors 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. Same goes for the poem about your brother. Don't doubt your writing ability, your writing is the one thing you can trust... Even if people disagree don't listen to them, take there critisism and make your self a better writer. If you ever need me I'm here. =) - (Krystyna) |
| ItMustBeLove 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the twist in the end, it's almost refreshing (as in, it's good she's (or he?) isn't totally bottling it up. This is pretty good, slightly emo (but not in a bad way :D), but still good. Keep it up! |
| The Dormouse 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuse*cries* you shouldn't have to pretend, wewa. I'll listen. I love you. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI know what you mean again. Totally. Your work is really good. Keep up the great work. =] |
| soccerfreak18 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseso sad but really good. i like depressing stuff. Yeah pretending sucks great job keep it up |
| Cracked Mirror Image 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusecries...thats sad... we all need to write something happy... good though...ur getting better gRaCe |
| Ashelin 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseI know all about pretending. It sucks, but that is what poetry is for, right? Great job on this, I can totally relate. |