Wow, especially the lines 'I don’t love you anymore because

The sunshine dried up my infatuation'

Yepp. that's good stuff. Also good description of the eyes at the beginning.

Fantastic! You expressed your feelings so vividly that I took a moment of silence and deep breath at the end. You have a way with words, most definitely.

I can't say enough how much I love the way you paint pictures with words.

"Fade into unflattering colorful bruises

Of bloodshot pink and tongue tied red..."

Simply beautiful.

This is beautiful. Lovely job.

How did you get spaces in between your stanzas without putting dashings? Teach me your ways.

Rowan.

Added to my favourites, really beautifully written and totally love it. The details so vivid and waw lol x