oh honey honey firstly thank you for the review
but more importantly
your writing is trans-**-scendent
i envy you
keep writing forever and ever and change bad days around and around up again

M, what a beautiful piece. I can't believe I haven't read your work before. Crazy. My favorite bits were "a summer mix of salt and heat and earth" for those great sense elements, and then "honey-streams of honesty," because that's just gorgeous. Beautiful. I'll be watching out for more from you. Keep writing! :)

"i close my eyes until it slips back down my throat"
amazing.

Oh this was the sweetest prettiest little poem I ever did read. Wonderful dear.

- QoS

beautiful, I love it. Keep up the great work.
Faith

god. you leave me speechless. :]
you are so poetic and I love it.
in case you didn't know...
it's Laura. xD

"spilling / out of me in / honey-streams of honesty" are beautiful lines. I really like this. (Anberlin is one of my heroes, too. ^_~)