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| goldenstars 2008-07-18 ch 27,  | abusejust wanna tell u how much i love this story i just reread it && i stil love it |
| WhisperInTheDark 2008-05-09 ch 27, | abusethat was a great story! i just read it all the way through and i was blown away~ keep it up and i look forward to more! :) |
| obsessive reader 2008-04-13 ch 27, | abusewow. this story is wicked. what was your inspiration for it. i loved it. maybe i could write something about my experiences of being in foster care, what do ya think |
| Your reality check 2008-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseLame, unrealistic and a complete Mary Sue... I think that sums up your story nicely. Boring Heroine and storyline. |
| a beginner 2008-04-05 ch 27, | abusethat was fast, but honestly able to be praised... nice work... hope to hear from u again... PS: SOON |
| therules 2008-04-02 ch 27, | abuseI loved this story. Great writing. It was really different from all the stories out there.:) |
| yayawhynot89 2008-04-02 ch 27, | abuseThe ending seemed kind of abrupt but overall it was a good fic. and i so wanted her and Max together but oh well |
| invizygirl 2008-03-31 ch 25, | abuseo yikes. angry max. interesting. |
| WriterGurl123 2008-03-31 ch 25, | abuseWell she has one thing down. She needs to knock out a couple more things before she can be truly happy. Post More Soon! |
| yayawhynot89 2008-03-30 ch 25, | abuse*GAsp* ! What the hell?!? lol Loved it! More please :D Oh and geez talk about being insecure i like Max but he needs to chillax and dun dun dun dun Ben and Jesse hehe can't wait for more |
| writes-with-her-heart 2008-03-30 ch 25, | abuseoh no! not Hide, he's to cute to leave the story. please update soon, i gotta see what happens. |
| goldenstars 2008-03-29 ch 25, | abuseyah a quick updaterer! man i didnt expect that jealous much |
| writes-with-her-heart 2008-03-29 ch 24, | abuseis that the end? i hope not, even though it's not that bad and ending. you know a good story doesn't have an ending. if it was, man that was one heck of a story! i totally loved it and i completely encourage you to keep writing. |
| invizygirl 2008-03-28 ch 24, | abusehm interesting. update soon. |
| writes-with-her-heart 2008-03-28 ch 8, | abusegreat story! |