I think we all feel confused about ourselves sometimes. I know I am all the time. The way I am in my head and on paper sometimes dosnt match the way I am with my friends. Good work as always. And I hope you find yourself again soon.

i can really relate to this sadly...it's such a sad thing to feel that way you know? but none-the-less amazing work once again.

rira-chan

P.s thank you so much for your reveiws! XD im glad you liked all them

beautifully chilling. Its haughnty and sorrowful, and we all need to ask for help, even if we are afraid. I love the "lifeless puppet" line. There were a few grammatical errors, but that couldn't change the feel that this poem holds. Your writing is always so exquisite!

Shayla

Wow that gave me goosebumps, it really did. Man, I kind of know that feeling only with me the tears just wouldn't start it was as if I became hollow, man it was bad I would it really talk, leave the house or eat. But I'm getting better now, I hope. Anyway love the peom. And I hope things are getting better for you or whoever this poem is about.

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musiclover4life

This is very good! I love the last stanza. It's very like a cry for help kind of, but also an unveiling. Not your best grammar wise (although i shouldn't be talking, i have the worst grammar on the planet (i dont even know if I spelled grammar right)). It wasn't your best, but that's not saying much bad because I love all your writing! Keep Writing! (please review me too!)

Asking for help is good at times. We can get so overwhelmed with everything, and just forget why we are living and just the point of it all. I liked this, and I can really feel your longing in this poem. It was wonderful. Great job.