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| Zutara Livs On 2007-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseI think this is a very true poem for some people. Because I know firsthand of people who lose their faith, and can't find it again. I like how you question it all. How you point out the obvious that we all avoid. Keep up the good work. Very good choice of wording. Loved it. ~Jelly Bean |
| dragonex030 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI dont agree with it, but good wording... |
| WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseLiked it. I don't really agree with it, but it was good, especially the last lines "the angels are falling, and we're waving goodbye" - classic. Kate )0( |