 marinawings 2007-04-20 . chapter 2hi there! this story is very interesting so far. the plot is very creative. i like that. your characters are likable. i like that, too. some events, such as the tide coming in, seemed a little rushed, but to me, rushing a little is better than dragging things out. catherine seems to be rather calm about waking up in a totally different reality, but that seems to be her personality anyway, calm and collected. i like andrew. why can't i wake up to dancing in the arms of an attractive guy to 40s music? lol. update soon! i'll be looking forward to it! |