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Reviews For: It Will All Be The Same

Getuie
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseI'm sure you posted this before... might want to take one of the two down.
simpleplan13
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuseTell's lies to your eyes...tells
Nows just a memory... now's
I only pray I'm be away... I'll be
here screams in the night... hear

I like the rhyming at random points... i also like the piece there are a lot of pieces about propel pretending to be happy but I liek how in the middle yours took a general point of view for the world not just for you.. great piece
Lisastriker
2007-06-01
ch 1,
abuseDramatic poem. But i love it! Especially the part "Just because they don't have it as easy as you" up to "I know the pain of crying yourself to sleep". Keep writing! God bless.
PurpleLeopard
2007-04-20
ch 1,
abuseit's great and sometimes i feel that way
Godsgirl91
2007-04-19
ch 1,
abuseHi, That is so beautiful! I loved it! Love ya, LeeLee
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