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| Getuie 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm sure you posted this before... might want to take one of the two down. |
| simpleplan13 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseTell's lies to your eyes...tells Nows just a memory... now's I only pray I'm be away... I'll be here screams in the night... hear I like the rhyming at random points... i also like the piece there are a lot of pieces about propel pretending to be happy but I liek how in the middle yours took a general point of view for the world not just for you.. great piece |
| Lisastriker 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseDramatic poem. But i love it! Especially the part "Just because they don't have it as easy as you" up to "I know the pain of crying yourself to sleep". Keep writing! God bless. |
| PurpleLeopard 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseit's great and sometimes i feel that way |
| Godsgirl91 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseHi, That is so beautiful! I loved it! Love ya, LeeLee |