I love how you have the title on the side making up the lines! That is so creative. Anyway, sad but good poem. I can really relate to the OF lines. Good job as always.

i loved the layout to this very good

rira-chan

Brilliant as usual. I love how you always use different styles of writing.

Shayla

I don't see much of this style of poetry. I don't even remember the specific name for it. Anyways, I love what you did with it. Portraying all this emotion and still staying close to the structure. Great job

Wow. That was awesome. The format was really cool! Good job!

"My mind is turning, beds are burning" - these are great lines. Excellent work. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

Anna _

Very good! I liked this one! keep writing! love your poems!

Well, I hope your life isn't JUST that.

But the poem is great. I like these acrostics you've been doing.

Life is hard. I can't even think right now. This was a great poem, and I can relate a lot. "My mind is turning, beds are burning/you just don't care, do you?" Those are probably my favorite lines. Great job.