|Reviews for Story of my Life|
| CrazyTurtles 4/22/07 . chapter 1
I love how you have the title on the side making up the lines! That is so creative. Anyway, sad but good poem. I can really relate to the OF lines. Good job as always.
| rira-chan 4/22/07 . chapter 1
i loved the layout to this very good
| MirrorMirrorOnTheWall 4/21/07 . chapter 1
Brilliant as usual. I love how you always use different styles of writing.
| TylerB 4/20/07 . chapter 1
I don't see much of this style of poetry. I don't even remember the specific name for it. Anyways, I love what you did with it. Portraying all this emotion and still staying close to the structure. Great job
| tearsofthefallen 4/20/07 . chapter 1
Wow. That was awesome. The format was really cool! Good job!
| Princess-anna57 4/19/07 . chapter 1
"My mind is turning, beds are burning" - these are great lines. Excellent work. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
| EmilyAlice10 4/19/07 . chapter 1
Very good! I liked this one! keep writing! love your poems!
| a silenced revolution 4/19/07 . chapter 1
Well, I hope your life isn't JUST that.
But the poem is great. I like these acrostics you've been doing.
| Ashelin 4/19/07 . chapter 1
Life is hard. I can't even think right now. This was a great poem, and I can relate a lot. "My mind is turning, beds are burning/you just don't care, do you?" Those are probably my favorite lines. Great job.