I was going really well for a while but you might want to think of a different way to word the second to last stanza...it seems off.

Pretty powerful piece of work - the disconnectedness of the lines, the unsettled attitude of the speaker, the scary message...I'd think it to be the type of poem used to encourage safer sex!

(No, really.)

Later!

Confluence

I don't know if you meant this to be humourous, but that's how I found it... but it's cute!